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About Me Deviant Artist Member David Alex van Putten19/Male/United States Recent Activity
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David Alex van Putten
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United States
Current Residence: California
deviantWEAR sizing preference: Men's medium? i guess.
Print preference: Whatever gets me more money
Favourite genre of music: Pretty much everything EXCEPT rap, hip-hop and country, and ANYTHING that even comes close
Favourite photographer: A good one
Favourite style of art: 3D and Photoshop
Operating System: Mac OSX
MP3 player of choice: iPod
Shell of choice: Turtle
Wallpaper of choice: New Dawn
Skin of choice: The one on my body
Personal Quote: The only thing I'm sure of is that I'm not sure of anything
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~xAmorarkx Jul 13, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
hey there. Total stranger but a friend of Wolfrage324.
you may remember him or not but he asked you to look at something of his. I was thinking if you could look at something of mine as well. and if you could give me an honest opinion of what think of it. [link]

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It's interesting. I've spent most of this last year teaching myself to do creative writing, but I dealt almost entirely with Screenplays and stageplays.

I think what you have here could really benefit from some more detail. I don't understand the setting, of the dream OR of when he wakes up. We don't really know who this character is or what kind of world he lives in, but we've been thrust into it so suddenly.

When I write my screenplays (which, I know, is very different from writing short stories, but the principle remains, I think), I like to visualize what the character is doing, where he/she is, what's happening around them, etc., and put that on paper before I even start on dialogue.

You could have something very good here. I'm sure this world you're creating is very fantastic, and all fleshed out in your head, but you have to remember to tread lightly when introducing it to strangers.

I hope this helps.

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~xAmorarkx Jul 21, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
it does. alot of this really helps me since I'm going back intot he creative writing world. I've been gone for quite sometime.
I had someone I know to edit for me so I'll be uploading it again shortly.
like in 5 minutes. You could tell me what you think of the edited version and see if there's still more to improve on

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~Wolfrage324 Jun 21, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
could you tell me what you think of this?
[link] any way you think I could improve?

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I walk my path isolated from everyone.
I lead the weak and unite the strong.
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:icondvanp123:
Your style is one I have no practice in, and couldn't properly critique.

Nonetheless, it's a very good drawing. I like your attention to detail. Keep up the good work!

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~Wolfrage324 Jun 21, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
really?
wow thats, thats pretty surprising right there
MY style is a mix of anime-ish and realistic. I make details liek clothing and hair close to realistic

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I am the lone wandering wolf
I walk my path isolated from everyone.
I lead the weak and unite the strong.
I am the outCast
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:icondvanp123:
yeah, I've never been into Anime so much, nor the art style. But I've come to appreciate the talent required to do it well.

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~Wolfrage324 Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
[link] check this out.

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I am the lone wandering wolf
I walk my path isolated from everyone.
I lead the weak and unite the strong.
I am the outCast
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=Justtoast Jan 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
o/

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Let's Re-Draw the world!!!!
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:icondvanp123:
I can't tell if that's an emoticon or not.

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